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Resist the temptation to embellish your resume with elaborate terminology. You’ll only insert a vagueness into a document that needs to be streamlined.

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The biggest communication mistakes, in my opinion, come from people’s efforts to appear intelligent. It is why so many people misuse the first person singular pronoun “I.” (It is I when it’s a subject and me when it’s an object.) But for some reason, people are insecure about using the word me. My guess is because the ultimate and most obvious indication of poor grammar is when me is used when it shouldn’t be, as in “Me and Tom went to school together.” So people overcompensate and avoid using me when it’s perfectly appropriate. They’ll say, “They went to the movie with Roger and I” instead of “They went to the movie with Roger and me.”

So, what in the name of all that is sacred is my point, and what does it have to do with resumes? People tend to use terminology in resumes that they think sounds better but, in actuality, is merely vague or off-putting. Here are some examples of terms you should avoid in your resume, where space is of the essence.

Utilize. Why the word “use” has fallen out of favor as of late is beyond me. If you used your knowledge of database administration to save the company some money then just say it. “Utilizing” your knowledge doesn’t make it sound better.

Impacted. You affect an outcome, you don’t impact it. Maybe it’s just me, but the word “impact” instantly puts me in mind of a blowhard who sits in meetings using buzzwords, while everyone else is out affecting an outcome. When you dress up words, it makes the reviewer wonder what you’re trying to hide.

Assist, Contribute, and Support. There is not a hiring manager alive who would be able to discern from your resume exactly what you mean when you say you supported an initiative or contributed to a project. Contributing to a project could mean anything from writing and enforcing the project plan to just opening the door for the actual project manager when his hands were full with a box of donuts. If you use these words, follow up with your specific responsibilities.

Successfully. Do I have to tell you how many interpretations there are for this word? When you say you “successfully” completed a tech implementation, do you mean you came in at budget in the time allotted with few post-implementation issues? Or maybe your idea of successful was that you got through the project in your lifetime without killing any of your co-workers in the process. Be specific about success. Use metrics to qualify it.

Anybody else have any resume terms they could do without?

Toni BowersToni Bowers is the Head Blogs Editor of TechRepublic. She has been in the publishing industry for 20 years, with concentration in IT-related topics. She has edited newsletters, books, and web sites pertaining to software, IT career, and IT management issues.

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Just between you & I.... MGP2 | 03/05/09
Between you and I Bluemoon29 | 03/06/09
OK, I gotta ask now... MGP2 | 03/06/09
Useless and made up words jhnhth@... | 03/06/09
On Buzzwords NickNielsen | 03/07/09
You are Correct, Sir bhthomas@... | 03/10/09
RE: Rid your resume of these useless words cooperl@... | 03/06/09
Useless words tanstaafl1963@... | 03/06/09
Affect/Effect iamagas | 03/06/09
effect john.a.wills@... | 03/06/09
I effected a reponse... cooperl@... | 03/11/09
Not exactly... ddviola | 07/23/09
RE: Rid your resume of these useless words lkeppel@... | 03/06/09
Impacted - Good object lesson bebrake@... | 03/06/09
Leveraging your Advantage jevans4949@... | 03/06/09
RE: Rid your resume of these useless words don.gulledge@... | 03/06/09
RE: Rid your resume of these useless words mark.farey@... | 03/06/09
Did this, resulted in this... Dr_Zinj | 03/06/09
Myself dpanzer@... | 03/06/09
RE: Rid your resume of these useless words mneville@... | 03/06/09
Administrate dpanzer@... | 03/06/09
RE: Rid your resume of these useless words bsunshine@... | 03/06/09
A Copy of The Elements of Style can help avoid this nonsense phillytechwriter | 03/30/09
...and from our friends in finance... lolsen@... | 06/02/09
As used in financial circles NickNielsen | 06/02/09
I am not alone! roy.atkinson@... | 06/02/09

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